Have you remembered?
- To introduce yourself using your first name and your school.
- Opened with a positive statement about what you have read.
- Included a thoughtful statement, how did you feel, why did you like it specifically?
- Asked a question to suggest a possible edit or change.
Hi there, my name is Amethyst and I am a student in room 12 at New Windsor School. I really like how they teached me all about themselves and showed me where to go. It made me think of people that i knew like Samarah and Karlos’s friends because because they showed me and introduced me to them. Have you thought about how to make me friends so i would be really happy.
Delete the lines and insert your language. When ready, show your comment to your teacher/buddy checker and then copy (Ctrl + C) and paste (Ctrl + V) into the comments section of the post.
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